Yeah, I know. They don't mean to do harm. It's just that their emotions get hard to control and they write poetry. Don't get me wrong: there's nothing wrong with that. Even been known to do it myself. The key difference is: I didn't publish it on the bloody internet for the world to accidentally step in it.
| Daddy
As the years fade on our tears fall with unconditional
love, for we know you wont be here forever.
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God!
Apostrophe?
"sparkeling"?
Pass the bucket!
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| OPERATION DESERT FOX HAS BROKE OUT.....THE AMARICAN SECURITY WILL FINALLY BE MET.....JUST KILL SADDAM ALL TOGETHER THIS TIME....END IRAQ'S AGONY! | Post script
This is by the same author, on his/her home page: note the masterful spelling, grammar and depth of thought typical of great poets. As poems go, it's actually one of the author's better tries. |
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